resolved dialogue script

After looking at how genre could affect a script we then tried to revolve our scripts.

Here is the revolved final version on my script.

paul: Yalright mate?

Taxi: Yeh where you going pal?

Paiul: just round the corner, duck street, you knoe it?

Taxi: Yeh yeh cheers..

…awkward silence…

Taxi: So hows It going? You ok?

Paul: Yeh…

Taxi: you had a good day?

Paul: yeh…

Taxi: …so what you been up to?

Paul: Look, im not really in the mood to talk, ok?

Taxi: ah, sorry… ok.

Paul: sorry I didn’t mean to yell. Its just not been a very good day.

Taxi: ahhh its fine, don’t worry about it.

Taxi: so whats up with you then?

Paul: I really shouldn’t say..

Taxi: hmmm.. alright then.  Well if somethings bothe..

(paul interrupts)

Paul: well, if you must know, I witnessed something the other day, its been messing with my head since.

Taxi: witness something? Like a robbery or a… murder?

I never finished my script, i just didnt feel like it was going anywhere and struggled with writing in dialogue. Really didn’t enjoy doing script writing, I just didn’t feel that I could be creative enough and that my stories where going anywhere interesting, definitely to practice this some more.